Chapter 3 Book 1

Chapter update

May 07, 2023

Chapter update on Chapter 3 Book 1

I have been re writing chapter 3 this week. Couple different version of the chapter. Making few big changes of the chapter and characters back story as well.

I already thought I had finished writing this chapter.

But then I realized I had been forgetting to add details for one really important event of one character in this chapter. And I think I need to add some more mentioning about later in the story.

These early chapter are from when I started writing this story. And it was meant to be just short story. Apparently I didn't pay attention for them back then.

So now I need to rework some parts of the story and luckily I noticed it before moving to print it out paper and starting edit.

Where I'm now

I'm almost done with the re writing chapter and getting the important things added for the chapter.

I need to fix one part of the chapter 3 I added previous re writing I did this week.

And add all those in story and plot notes. Since I made few changes back stories. I need to pay attention to the changes in the back story later points in the story.

I'm going to continue writing after Sundays backup for my laptop. Depends on how long back up does take. Last Sunday it was almost 9 hours.

Love C.F Grönroos

Old version of chapter 3

I'm not going to delete this. Since I want to be honest with my writing journey. So each version is valuable and has its purpose. Each is taking the book closer to publishing.

Journey of Rose

Chapter 3

Chapter 3 What is wrong with Laura? Friday 3th of May Laura was watching outside to her garden from the second floor master bedroom. The master bedroom was big with windows two outside walls. There was entrance to the balcony on the long outside wall. Wall next to the double bedroom doors had the big TV and the door to the walking-in-closet. The other inner wall had the door to private bathroom. Room was white with white antique furniture. Bed was big custom made four-poster bed it had been the family since Laura’s great, great, great grandfather had gotten it. Curtains on the windows were dark purple and made sure sun didn’t shine through the windows. Laura wanted to sleep in dark. This used to be her parents’ bedroom and it was her father’s Viktor De Bellefort childhood home. There had been already De Bellefort’s in four generations at this big two-story white wooden house. And Laura had not been able to make it to six generations. Something her mother had constantly reminding her about. How herself had come pregnant after only a year of marriage and lost three other children before they were even born leaving Laura to be only one. And it was Laura’s responsibility now have several children. But Laura had not been ready for that…

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